FINAL FOUR PAGES

Creature w/ Cog

 The creature "Envy" from fullmetal alchemist brotherhood is disturbing and grotesque which are qualities quite horrifying which I wish to emulate with my own creature design. the malleability of its form is also great and respresents hybrid matter how I imagine it to move.

 Venom is a great reference as the build and shape language of this particular iteration fits perfectly for the kind of situations my creature will need to perform.

page 21 - 22

So page 20 plans to have a lot of storytelling elements in the montage like background to show the twins development over the years. This will require some time but I believe that because it is a flash back that the lines can be rough. the cleaner the lines the longer it takes me to complete I have discovered.

Revised Page 20 layout

page 15 - 20

[page 20, finished nov 2]

page 15 - 19

[page 20, finished nov 2]

trial and error

 I had a difficult time with this pose and perspective for this panel where cypress punches a guard through Mara's Cell wall. I wanted to communicate the impact that the earlier poses were lacking quite severely.

Pencils